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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-07-12 07:07 PM



Your shaded eyes how they are dark
and yet so clear. I see you come
to be out of the near of the waves
of the sands.

Clash clash clashing together
in my heart,you wanted it all
I gave it to you,you never
wanted me to leave you so I
stayed.

The day is longer now and time
drags on I am here alone I am
the one that did no wrong,I am
the most beauitful person in the
world.

I'm sorry if I was not what your
seeking what your just freaking
gettin on my last nerves for your
constant lacking of judgements as
the beer clouds your own mind of
what is really good and what you
have missed

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Gaia
1 posted 2005-07-12 09:29 PM


sad, what beer clouds can do
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-07-15 04:24 AM


ouch

good to write it out

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2005-07-15 04:52 AM


Can understand the hurt in this...bravely written..thank you FO....

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-07-15 03:21 PM


ty

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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