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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-07-12 07:41 AM

sea of proper mornings
would you just pretend to be
a dragon's dream

as amber water waiting
to be the current's echo
before waves are shuddered

and smooth song quieting
is only in the deepest place

will you be the heavy flesh
of a mountain's horizon to eyes
pressing more than imagined hands

can claim for a conqueror's panting
oh, to dance your urges as the tides
and birth my mooring's new splinterings

sea of proper mornings
may I pray you sinful with your lovely

______________
dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-07-12 08:05 AM

is only in the deepest place

yes, deepest and most secret place
where a certain gaze may enter...

gathering write, filled collectivey with images yet to be born

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-07-12 08:50 AM

Such is
the sailor's song
and why
he won't leave
the sea...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-07-12 10:54 AM

D- this is exquisite - stirring -

good morning

S

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-07-12 12:03 PM

"and smooth song quieting
is only in the deepest place"
~*~

"oh, to dance your urges as the tides"

this is beautiful

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-07-12 12:53 PM

"and smooth song quieting
is only in the deepest place

will you be the heavy flesh
of a mountain's horizon to eyes
pressing more than imagined hands"

Beautiful, DS!!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-07-13 07:20 AM

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2005-07-13 03:10 PM

"can claim for a conqueror's panting
oh, to dance your urges as the tides
and birth my mooring's new splinterings

sea of proper mornings
may I pray you sinful with your lovely"

Surely you have a PHD in this? May I call you Dr. D then ?

your words always fill me with feeling.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2005-07-13 03:15 PM

Beautiful images in this one, stranger. I love your use of language.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2005-07-13 06:50 PM

thank you whispers of pleasure
for the healing of your eyes
on my humble penspeak

you all bless me
thank you

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-07-14 06:53 AM

a dragons dream

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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