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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-07-12 12:59 PM


Afternoon Blessings

While looking into her eyes
I could cry, because I know
that we have such a brief time
to share, special moments to
show how much we care.

When afternoon comes,
she is gone...
not wanting to feel alone,
I call her on the phone.

The softness of her voice
is refreshing, providing
an afternoon blessing.

JamesLee
July11
2005
Conflicting work schedules.

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Tndeer1
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since 2005-06-24
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1 posted 2005-07-12 01:21 AM


This is so very sweet Mr. James.
You truly are a romantic and that is very rare these days. Such a gentle heart you have. Who ever she is, is very fortunate. I especially like this one.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-07-13 12:00 PM


Thank you Tndeer for the nice response.   James
BlueEyes
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3 posted 2005-07-13 02:59 PM


That was so beautiful and romantic.... Very nice poem.

BlueEyes

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-07-13 03:01 PM


sorry for your conflicting schedules
it's a fact of life these days

hang in there

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-07-14 01:09 AM


Thank you Blue Eyes and passing shadows for the nice responses....I hope she hangs in there...James
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