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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2005-07-11 10:58 PM


Riding on clouds,
Nothing below,
But emptiness,
Time stands still.

All I see is me,
I call out,
No answer,
Now I scream,
All that I hear back is an echo.

Hold on,
Try not to cry,
As I take this journey,
This ride,
Just hold on.

I feel like I need a guide,
But who,
All of this races through my mind,
Is there ever an end to it all,
Not sure.

I’m falling apart,
Not really here,
Trembling harder and harder,
Feeling the fear within.

Hold on,
Try not to cry,
As I take this journey,
This ride,
Just hold on.

Hold on,
Try not to cry,
As I take this journey,
This ride,
Just hold on.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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1 posted 2005-07-14 12:45 PM


Yes...hold on, for getting thrown is no fun.
Hoping all is well.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-07-14 03:21 PM


Kelly~
I love this write~

Check your email~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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