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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-10 03:01 PM


Within was honesty withing the twirls that honesty was just a curl on a cartoon a smell on an idea a thought that danced on fantasia that imaged


Within

Was

Freedom

Peace

And the thought

That someone

Would learn


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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2005-07-10 03:07 PM


I can honestly relate to this


        good write, well captured

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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2 posted 2005-07-13 03:01 PM


I enjoyed this one.  The short, sharp lines conveyed the feel well.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-07-13 03:16 PM


Within was honesty withing the twirls that honesty was just a curl on a cartoon a smell on an idea a thought that danced on fantasia that imaged

~*~

This...

alone

brought the smiles...

MGROVES
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california
4 posted 2005-07-14 06:49 AM


great words for this am

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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