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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-07-09 10:59 PM





I Will ... Write of You…


You, a unique individual,
capable of many fine acts ~
looking beyond your own soul
and taking on several tasks…

I have often read your words
so admiring your writing
in languages I understand,
and so often find, inviting….

Ofttimes you wax poetic and kind
other times you speak your mind,
then you gaze and glance romantic
then you will veer and write semantic.

How I envy your flutter-by moments
as you cause slight tremors of heart
in that winsome, carefree way of yours ~
indeed, a lovely and practiced art.

But what causes me to stop
and read along fine lines
is the sincerity that you impart,
and the care of it, refined…

One might pen, and one may write,
others wax philosophically
but when one wears a heart on sleeve
then I would say, please call on me

Call on me to answer true
call on me to write to you
call on me to whisper yes
and savor this written caress

So you have asked I write of you…
It stands above, in ink of blue...

~*~

Slightly revised from 2001

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent."Julia Cameron

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
1 posted 2005-07-09 11:08 PM



Positively a lovely  piece of your heart..
I'm glad to be one of the first to read it and feel its warmth. I feel as if hugged by you. Haven't I told you before that you are truly a sunshine that embraces us all...?

Thank you

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2 posted 2005-07-09 11:15 PM


"looking beyond your own soul
and taking on several tasks"
what a beautiful tribute!

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3 posted 2005-07-09 11:32 PM


Awwwww Karilea, this is just beautiful.
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4 posted 2005-07-09 11:58 PM



Karilea, your ink was pretty pink! ~ and as beautiful and lovely as a rose.



Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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5 posted 2005-07-10 12:07 PM


Sissie

"One might pen, and one may write,
others wax philosophically
but when one wears a heart on sleeve
then I would say, please call on me"

This you do, again and again!  You're beautiful without/within!  

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6 posted 2005-07-10 01:25 AM


When a writer reaches that point that her (or his, for that matter) heart flows freely, and thoughts uninhibited, I stop and listen.....your words are a beautiful river!   ....jo
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7 posted 2005-07-10 04:51 AM


a touching piece

from the heart

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Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-07-10 08:55 AM


Lovely lady you are as beautiful outside as you are within.
Love you...Nancy

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9 posted 2005-07-10 09:43 AM


The meter not only flowed smoothly, but the thoughts behind the words were just as smooth and of course, very well penned.


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10 posted 2005-07-10 10:50 AM


quote:
Call on me to answer true
call on me to write to you
call on me to whisper yes
and savor this written caress


what a lovely call-to-arms

Susan
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11 posted 2005-07-10 11:08 AM


this is so lovely - and kind - and beautiful - and your soul shines -

Susan

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12 posted 2005-07-10 03:16 PM


inspirations are SOUL DEEP ...

          *  S

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13 posted 2005-07-10 03:18 PM


I love this poem.  Very nicely done.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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14 posted 2005-07-10 07:43 PM


Anyone who is fortunate enough to have your pen bleed its ink for them is wealthy beyond measure
Ruth

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15 posted 2005-07-10 08:43 PM


What heart of tender flesh
might be held in tremor...as
butterflies flit and fly and
a sigh gently touches a lip
so tenderly sweet.

Beautiful KJ...by far one of your best.

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16 posted 2005-07-10 10:02 PM


What a gem this gorgeous piece is.  I'm so glad I read it.  KJ
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17 posted 2005-07-10 10:41 PM


It is all that...and more.
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18 posted 2005-07-11 10:07 AM


Any poet would be honored to think this might be for them... Beautiful write! *S*
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19 posted 2005-07-11 02:01 PM


Exquisite...

believe in what your heart feels...

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20 posted 2005-07-11 05:45 PM


You don't just hit the bull's eye -- your arrow cuts it out and pushes it through the hay bales behind the target......Nice shootin!

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21 posted 2005-07-11 06:09 PM


Magnificent Sunshinygirl  bigsmiles

Mxx

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

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22 posted 2005-07-13 12:06 PM


A fine piece of writing...James
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23 posted 2005-07-14 10:18 AM


you do it good lady

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24 posted 2005-07-14 10:42 AM


Sunshine, what an wonderful poem and honor for all the great writers you speak of. Well done.

SG

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25 posted 2005-07-14 11:11 AM


One might pen, and one may write,
others wax philosophically
but when one wears a heart on sleeve
then I would say, please call on me


this is one small example of the generous soul you are....

beautifully thought and written...

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26 posted 2005-10-25 09:49 PM


Just looking back, thinking, remembering....

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