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My pod or yours?
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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My pod or yours? Today a flighty little bumbling bee did chase me relentlessly, assuming I sent my scent to capture the essence of he who would hover above me devotedly. Little did I understand how the scented power of love’s band could so recklessly capture anyone, that the scent I wore upon my hand would summon such devotion from the likes of he! Oh, but to cast the same spell upon the heartbeat of my desire! Alas, love’s moments pass unrequited! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you know, this is why I love you and your writing, I just never know what I am going to stumble across and Kacy? The play on words here and the scheme is just perfect, besides the message, of course. did chase me relentlessly, assuming I sent my scent to capture the essence of he who would hover above me devotedly. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grinning, glad you enjoyed this whimsical write |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whimsical, and enchanting... thanks for leaving such [a] fresh scents of nature!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you're welcome, lady Sunshine  gotta watch out for those sunny little bees when you tip-toe through the wildflowers |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... suddenly have the craving for some pure honey ... ??? lol, like the natural you!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
SWEET reply, Craig. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Rich one, Kacy!  ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Glad you liked it, Jo. And thanks for adding your heartbeat to the Larry C post. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Kacy A delightful read....but be careful Some bees have very little merit and can sting hard, beyond that, they have few talents... Wasps and hornets can be confused with honey makers...But all can be attracted by your perfume... enjoyed -----------ice/ford ><> |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Cool rhyming scheme, coupled with cute verses... light and refreshing. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this kinda threw me off-guard, but in a good way. . been thinking of appropriate words to describe my sentiments but whimisical really says it all.great poetic surprise! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sounds like a few men I've dated enjoyed If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks for the smile  S |
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