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Open Poetry #36
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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-09 01:02 PM


Breeze was drifting through never got out of the acholic haze that drifted and never reality driffted into this acholohgallc haser

;;;;;;World is different when you dont ;needc to hink
and merry words arn't there and you need to think

for someone - me

Breeze was drifting
Undercurrents that
Passed wind like a neighbour's mouth
Flapping low and rising high
With no substance
Just fat to fry
On images of friends who never cried in the fat and smoke
Created bye and bye
In dreams they had

Bodger

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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-21 09:57 PM


Very interesting..thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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