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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-08 12:44 PM


Into destruction peace above hid the anarchy below sucking power to desecration

Spawned in heaving omens in a jungle that had no substance no vision and was an image that demanded sacrifice of yourself in red lines of flame that attacked

In a crippled mess aimlessly killing each other as they knew no better

Drawing strength from energy to signal and find and control

Someone

With power

Who could be controlled

Who entered this world knowing

Power was her possession

And herself

That power

Was the Earth

© Copyright 2005 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
1 posted 2005-07-08 01:10 PM


Wow.. The words are quite powerful.  I am going to need to read it I think some more though to know it better.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-07-08 01:54 PM


I suppose everyone deep down feels that someone else is to blame for failing to achieve.

You didn't concentrate it was someone else's fault;  you were turned down for something and you couldn't find the time to really, in yourself 'understand'.

The world is supposedly always at fault and it wasn't you.

I do the same and I am doing the same, but I never ever said "I was different".

Bodger

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-07-08 02:19 PM


yeah, I understood this
and agree

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-07-08 02:38 PM


oh Yeah, I needed my coffee lol. I wasn't sure if it was that or something else. Hey, I gunna be honest...  I like the poem alot.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
5 posted 2005-07-09 12:53 PM


thanks

Bodger

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