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Dee
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0 posted 2005-07-08 04:53 AM


My Advice

When life starts getting too tough,
when your hopes begin to sink,
and if one more broken dream
will send you over the brink.
When you begin to feel like
you can't bear to face the day,
don't just stand there crying foul
cause the world won't play your way.

Go ahead and spoil yourself,
going out and having fun.
You need to get up and dance,
if you remember how its done.

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

© Copyright 2005 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2005-07-08 05:29 AM


I agree with everything here...lets dance...

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-07-08 06:09 AM


Thanks Dee
I sure needed this

Juju
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3 posted 2005-07-08 10:04 AM


Thats true. I found out something wonderful one day... I am a truely lucky person.   So many people love me and care for me I am just so lucky. They may not be sane, but heh, Who is these days... every one is human. I make mistakes too...


LOve JUju

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The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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4 posted 2005-07-08 10:35 AM





Brava!

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5 posted 2005-07-08 10:57 AM


Dee~
Hey pretty lady ... SO GOOD to see you~

Thanks for the good news email !!!!

Love you ... and my love to Bec also~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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HopeS
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6 posted 2005-07-08 11:10 AM


inspiring message Dee , I have to keep reminding myself of that

Hope

Parker
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7 posted 2005-07-29 02:41 PM


or you could visit Canada to lift your spirits and dance under the northern lights.
HopeS
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8 posted 2005-07-29 03:01 PM


Good uplifting message and wise advice

Hope

Patricia
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9 posted 2005-07-29 03:46 PM


That is where I am headed tonight...and I will remember this poem while I shake it up!

See ya on the dance floor!

Patricia

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2005-07-29 05:08 PM


something I should do~~ great advice~~

M

Dee
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11 posted 2005-07-31 10:22 PM


Sorry I haven't answered anyones comments till now. Works been flat out and house hunting at the same time.

Thanks you all for your kind replies.
Goldenrose: I'd love to  

Passing Shadows: Always glad to be of service.

Juju: I think its more fun to be a little insane.

Sunshine: Thank you

Marge: Its good to be here, even if its only now and then.

Hope: I have learned again how to dance and it is very uplifting.

Park: Keep those lights burning. I would love to see them one day. (Who knows, it might make a nice place for a honeymoon. /pip/Forum3/HTML/003701.html )

Patricia: Hope you had a great time.

nakdthoughts: We all need a dance now and then.

Thank you all again,
Dee

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