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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-07-08 01:58 AM



Forgive Me


the mere thought of you
hurts my skin
time in the garden finds me
tasting the salt of your rain
forgive me
for my mind still finds me
living for fall
but spring holds me
warm with purple irises
time shut me down
it wasn’t so much
I tried to keep up
it was just that
it was passing me by

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-07-08 03:33 AM


Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-07-08 07:14 AM


good write here Helen
please stay safe in this storm we have coming


inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-07-08 08:33 AM


a meeting of all seasons
in one breath
lovely words of depth

Juju
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4 posted 2005-07-08 09:43 AM


I missed your writting where have you been.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Sunshine
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5 posted 2005-07-08 09:58 AM


We've all missed your writings, Helen...
hope things are going well for you.

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2005-07-08 10:48 AM


hope you are enjoying your new life, Helen..and as the others say...
take care during this storm.

hugs
M

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-07-08 12:48 PM


"it was passing me by"

and now?

  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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8 posted 2005-07-08 12:59 PM


Wonderful bittersweet write Helen.
It's so good to read you again.
Stay safe...stay happy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2005-07-11 09:37 AM


Some things are beyond our control... yet they leave guilt. This is beautifully bittersweet!!
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10 posted 2005-10-25 10:08 PM


And fall....may it hold you the same, dear lady....may it ever hold you the same.

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