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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-07-07 10:32 PM


rainbows hover,
and the hearts within
share bands and bonds
of humanity and God

and it's impossoble for me to see
where one begins
and the other ends

so whenever I see
a rainbow
I see
all the colors of
humanity
and whatever power
there may be

that is within reach
and yet
beyond me


© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-07-07 10:41 PM


Your writing...
is undergoing a witness...
I wanted to say "change"
but it is more than that, Kacy...

thank you...

for listening...

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2005-07-07 10:49 PM


it's easy to listen
when the messages are so clear and true
thanks for your reply

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2005-07-08 12:21 PM



A though provoking write.
Thank you

ctowen
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4 posted 2005-07-08 12:55 PM


...  ( taking a deep breath ) .... and I thought I was at awe ...!!!!


                  a remarkable and unforgettable heart, KC ...

ice
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5 posted 2005-07-08 05:54 AM


The pot of gold at the end of it, seems to me to be hope...

"that is within reach
and yet
beyond me(us)"

We must keep reaching...

Thank you for this poem...

-----------ice/ford
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passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-07-08 07:16 AM


well done!
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7 posted 2005-07-08 07:22 AM


Kacy this is so nice...good for me to be able to read it..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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8 posted 2005-07-08 07:50 AM


Oh God Kacy, I am so glad that you share your messages and visions with us.
You are a light to warm hearts upon these pages of blue.  Nicely done.

Give me your heart
Make it real
Or else forget about it...Santana

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2005-07-08 08:44 AM


beautiful rainbow
beautiful poet

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2005-07-08 11:07 AM


sent to me last evening...thought you would enjoy


M

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-07-08 12:46 PM


especially loved that last stanza!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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