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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa

0 posted 2005-07-07 08:42 PM


When the music’s here the makers cast their vibes
like a duo of magicians working magic in the sky
and the storm recedes, a chastised energy
sent to lick its wounds over an empty sea.  

Too soon, too soon, the sea becomes my feel
looking up and sensing life’s lack of harmony
growing larger, larger, with weighted disdain
and moving closer, closer, the essence of pain.

But when the music’s here I touch on spirit lands  
reverently like a bride welcomes in her man
and sideways move a dream past the love in me  
for in a dream the power to override the real.

Sky rumbles!  Is it thunder or an accolade for me
or celebratory drum rolls in place of love’s release,  
and now there is the rain, pitter-patter, gentle slow,
and I know the music makers can see into my soul.

They are the sun and sons of a woman in the know,
my midnight oil and stars … and the reason I feel old
but music burns the bridges between the weak and strong
like the flames of love justify a world gone wrong.

The makers and their music, love and lovers true
for one without the other like sky without the blue!

Helen / 8 July 2005


© Copyright 2005 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-07-07 09:57 PM


Helen?

There's a special place in my library...
for you...

and this !

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent."Julia Cameron

SoundWaves
Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113
Center Stage
2 posted 2005-07-08 12:38 PM


Great write Helen!!!  

The spotlight can only get brighter.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-08-21 11:16 AM


WhooHoo!!!
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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4 posted 2005-08-21 05:33 PM


Helen, this is superb!  I'm sending it to my music maker because I know she will appreciate the depth of it.   ....jo
icebox
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in the shadows
5 posted 2005-08-21 07:24 PM


Bessed are the music makers for they hath made us smile.
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
6 posted 2005-08-22 01:20 AM


I have to pay special tribute to this wonderful piece of writing, as I am a musician, and this one just caught me up and made me smile!!!  Thank you for this one, my friend!!  ~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
7 posted 2005-08-22 03:23 AM


Thank you all for the read made possible by Dixie bringing it back up.  There's something special about musicians - all of them - because they do indeed work magic.  
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