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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa

0 posted 2005-07-07 01:24 PM


Greed

Within the eyes of desire
Burn irises set afire
From beauty to admire
Drinking from the liquid flow
Basking in her after-glow
Satisfaction for the moment.

But when kisses are afar
The hearts fare is spent in bars,
The hideout spot of cheaters and sinners
Where sweet melodies of lust and saxophones
Blow intoxicating whispers into the minds of the lonely.

Shadows make love in the silence of darkness
And still…………
The light must eventually expose the truth,
The real reason a man will make love to a hundred women
Without ever loving himself first.

Marcel


write from the soul and the words will flow......

© Copyright 2005 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-07-07 01:26 PM


very very sad

Marcel... you write vividly and honestly, when I see you name, and click on you, I know I'm in for a life's lesson 101

Very good write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2005-08-21 11:11 AM


sad indeed
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