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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-07-06 07:28 PM




in the quiet of the night
and behind locked doors
you played for me
in a light
safe to be called yours
a moment of words to set
the cords to be played
the soft key of your voice
yet, the butterflies stayed
and it was in that moment
that music was grand
each note loving
and heartsent
played to understand ...

in the quiet of the night
I hear you
as you recite

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."

If it wasn't right, wasn't real ...
then why did it make us feel ....?

              

© Copyright 2005 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2005-07-06 07:35 PM


nice
very nice

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2005-07-06 07:38 PM


Thank you wonderful lady ....

                nice to see your words shine!!

        Hope all is going well, thanks for stopping by!!


                                 * Ct

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-07-06 10:28 PM


pretty words~~softened by you

*s

M

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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2005-07-07 12:33 PM


This was so well done and the photo added to the beauty.
Sandra

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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2005-08-06 04:45 PM


in the quiet of the night
I hear you""


love this....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

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