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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2005-07-06 11:18 AM


I’m Getting Better
Paul Wilson


I’m getting better
at hiding my pain
You can’t tell the difference
between my teardrops and the rain

With the smile I wear
no one can tell
This life I’m living
is a living hell

Everyday is a challenge
I have too face
The pain gets stronger
it’s found a new place

I’m getting better
at hiding my pain
I smile for you
and try not too complain

One day of hurting
is like a year too me
I don’t know how many more
sunrises I will see

I’ll live my life to the fullest
and share the good days with you
I’ll hide my pain and smile
until my life on earth is thru

It’s starting to rain again
or is it just my tears
Hold me tight sweetheart
like you did all those years

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-07-06 11:33 AM



It's not easy...
but you'll always
be better in my book.


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2 posted 2005-07-06 11:44 AM


WOW Paul, I really love this. Such a tender sharing of your heart. Hugs.
LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-07-06 12:08 PM


  come here Paul, cuz we're all getting ready for a great big Group Hug....

be strong and wise, and know with feelings, that we're there with you....

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-07-06 12:12 PM


Paul,
Is that what you saw in the tea leaves?
Enjoyed the write.

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5 posted 2005-07-06 01:23 PM


well Paul, every day when I awake with a little pain here or there ( age you know) at least I know I am still here and alive...

soft hugs for you
M

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6 posted 2005-07-06 02:10 PM


Hello Paul..
I live with a chronic progressive disease and know what you mean.
But somehow, someway, I manage to thank God for each new day..
and I smile and carry on..
Sending heart hugs your way.

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-07-06 02:19 PM


Sometimes hiding pain from the ones we care the most about is the kindest gift..

you are a wonderful man and poet!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Paul Wilson
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8 posted 2005-07-06 05:21 PM


Sunshine
Gentle Spirit
Lee J
Seymour
Naked Thoughts
Enchantress
Susan

Thanks to all of you for your caring replies. I wrote this poem about my wife and the pain she goes thru everyday because of chronic health problems, She is the toughest lady I have ever known. We've been married for 35 years and everyday I spend with her is a treasure I will keep forever.

I couldn't go through one percent of the pain that she deals with everyday. She wanted me to thank each of you for your caring words and thoughts, so from her to you thanks.

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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9 posted 2005-08-14 01:33 AM


Hugs to you and the Mrs.

:-)

Sunnyone
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10 posted 2005-08-14 02:02 AM


Hello Paul, and a good marriage like you have works both ways...you help her, and she will inspire you!!  What a wonderful poem this is, and as some of us deal with progressive illnesses, as I also do, we understand her pain, and wish her only the very best. And by the way...you are a gem of a husband, and I personally applaud you!!!   ~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

Paul Wilson
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11 posted 2005-08-14 02:57 AM


froggy...Thanks so much for the HUGS.
Glad that you care enough too read and reply...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2005-08-14 03:00 AM


sunnyone...You are so right. We celebrated 36 years on the 11th of this month. We were apart physically but together in our hearts.

She does inspire me. Your words about being a good husband make me blush, but thank you very much for them and for reading...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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