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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Musings I sat, and read you, and you, and not all sage, yet aged words of ghosts, but the current and climbing words of rhyming well, they took me up, and I then held the Host… and I damned the times that made the rhymes that hurt you so, though you didn’t know… though you couldn’t know… that I sat, here, crying… for you wrote me, and here I sat, for all I could be, as you wrote you, and that which you struggled through where I was once if not for now, and still I’m there, here, with you, somehow. I fear the light, it holds no ghosts… Yet this is what I seek the most; for I would have some wish come true, but yet I’d have it just for you. I think it simplifies down to this… if you are qualified by a miss, then I would miss said mark, just so, this, I know, just to be touched by God’s rain, and know the stroke of all His Great rainbows. For these gifts? They are great; they are the poets I know. ~*~ For my poets, and they know…who they are for they accept me, as I am. I cannot give you more than words... but please know...they are from this heart. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sissie poet...this touched me so...right down to my musings!!  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As you touch me. I didn't do my thoughts justice... may be... this was just practice. But thank you Marite... ~*~ yes, I caught the "mistype..." and left it... because I know a certain one who will smile |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes, you did your thoughts justice!! Love, Marite |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this alot. I don't know if I am one, But I don't care I write to realease and it is writing that makes all bad good. Good write. (: Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (; [This message has been edited by Juju (07-06-2005 04:24 PM).] [This message has been edited by Juju (07-06-2005 10:33 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh now you know that a certain spirit just smiled a whole lotta smiles across this room I'm sitting in. This is lovely, thank God I was pulled in to read today, I wouldnt want to have missed this. Lovely Momma Sun.  Yeah, I'm keepin it.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
darlin, this rang out to a very personification of great love for mankind, and your sistas....hugs to you lady...cannot tell you how this has grown a vein to me, and feeding me like a transfusion... What insight you have....sighs...and shaking my head in disbelief...although your most unaware, this came very upclose and personal... huggies for a great week ahead...and thank you... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Your thoughts don't always connect for me, but the way you phrase them sings! Well done, m'friend. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my..I am so pleased I didn't miss your musings.. Wonderful gift from you heart to those who read. Hugs to you lovely lady~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
These words....resonate in me. How long, I wonder, will my soul quiver its note in tune with this music? I think it will be a long time. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and I damned the times that made the rhymes that hurt you so, When a heart of great compassion rests side by side with incredible talent... we get poems like this... that touches every heart fortunate enough to read. |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
This is beautiful, made me feel warm. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sweet SIL and SIP (sis in PiP)... touched to tears as I truly feel this one. Has to be my favorite now. & love, jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
you have a gift - and you gift it beautifully - love your musings and your heart - S |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kari, I enjoyed this, your musings as always..profound. Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
It's always nice to be accepted, Sunshine. I am always happy to read what you write. Even though I don't always reply. |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Nice write, very deep thoughts! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sunshine, You with the understanding soul, this was really good reading and a peek into your heart.I know those of whom you write and others too have seen a shining part of you. So good of you to put it into words. martyjo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I still don't have an answer to the question I asked more than three months ago....unless the answer is "three months and still...with never in sight....." ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Were I to answer your question of than neither of us would muse - with love - for to have another answer just for you would leave your words to be untrue... Is there an answer? I think if there were to be, it would be held so close we might potion the motion and that, m'friend... is something to not only share... but to be held... thank you so much for revisiting one of my own favorites. |
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