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and then the rains came
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and then the rains came |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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grief snuck up hauled back and gut punched the day the hours and minutes winced and slowed to barely a crawl the day countered with a sharp inhale the sky paled and the strength drained from the earth’s greens and browns the clear blue quickly clouded over and then the rains came |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, honey...  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Aaah...sometimes the rain just evoke in me similar feelings.You have penned it well. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetJellyGirl~ I know this rain ... drenched am I also~  *Huglets* love~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it does sneak up just when you think you are away from it and then the rains come but the sun always shines again |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah JB gal, the rains come, they cleanse and then life is regenerated...  holding your hand wishing I could make it better somehow. Write lady, your soul sure does shine.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yeah, sometimes those gut punches bring a body to their knees...wrenching places we try to avoid, right? Hugs to you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If caring could be an umbrella... you'd peek from comfort just long enough to see the rainbows. Excellent write, my friend. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh how I do know that gut-punch feeling....wish you didn't..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all......sigh.......had to walk away from poetry, the lack of words is disheartening...to come back and find such care is encouraging...thank you  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have heard it time and time again, and always "they" say, "time" heals. I think not, m'self. Days like these come again and again, and the pain of loss is always new, and not a surprise, and yet, it still catches one offguard--like a suckerpunch. You have the words, j.b. *hearthugs* Anyone who doesn't understand should consider themselves temporarily fortunate. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hon, I understand these feelings so well. And, like Karen said, sometimes time doesn't heal. With some things we will think we are better about them, then they come right back with that same "gut-punch" and we are right back where we started from.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Beans of Jelly, you have a way of just reaching out and grabbing the solar plexus ~ and the heart ~ of your readers. I feel your words. You are a wonderfully expressive writer. Sending you an extra-loving hug, EA |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
This put me in a certain... how would I describe it... an earthy, weathery mood. Enjoyed. |
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