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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2005-07-05 07:49 AM

You stay in melbourne now,
coping better with its cold
than your frostbitten spirits

Your blogged words
spoke of your
attachment to life
like an outdated CD
You endure
the same old boring tunes,
reluctant to
expand your repertoire

You turn to
larger-than-life movie characters,
with their mind-numbing showcase
of how to lead
psyched-up lives

You tolerate
the smirking blank screen,
whose shroud of charged emptiness
you fumble with
by hastily placing
yet another disc

I relate
I place faith too
in the odds of deriving
divine inspiration/knowledge/lessons/whatever
from classier fictional realities

Yet I left your blog
without leaving a well of words
because i couldn't quite pen
a comment about kindred spirits

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-06 12:14 PM

dang, but you present another amazing portrait here, with incredibly perceptive insights into the real dynamics of relationships
another kaile keeper

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-07-06 04:02 AM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-07-06 05:26 AM

what an ending verse!

this is touching

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

4 posted 2005-07-06 02:24 PM

"I relate
I place faith too
in the odds of deriving
divine inspiration/knowledge/lessons/whatever
from classier fictional realities"

My favorite portion of the poem is stated above. What a talent you have. Thank you.

-John

nice use of muffin

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-07-06 02:43 PM

Excellent, Kaile!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2005-07-06 08:18 PM

I like this

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

7 posted 2005-07-07 12:55 PM

this is really good, nice job

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

8 posted 2005-07-07 06:47 PM

"You tolerate
the smirking blank screen,
whose shroud of charged emptiness
you fumble with
by hastily placing
yet another disc"

A great write I particularly enjoyed the above. Library time!

"And the sun went down, and the stars came out far over the summer sea,
But never a moment ceased the fight of the one and the fifty-three."

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