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of lover's sand |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I have been there with you often since we left the castle of dreams and you went back to the house on the hill with the proper locks I hear you singing sometimes when you are the wind and the windows are drapes that cling to your skin when you stand too close and let the wishes show they are pale favorites of mine how they jut heavy round just like the empty there in the hands of my mind and other spoons we made out of glue and saliva the walls of my tent are flimsy now if you have the moments and blades to make your own opening and don't mind my mind taking your hair down when we dance our sambas on a carpet of lover's sand [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-05-2005 08:53 AM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
breath taking d- beautiful -  s |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "and don't mind my mind taking your hair down" Very nice!  |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Beautiful!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
tender, sensual and warm...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hear you singing sometimes when you are the wind and the windows are drapes that cling to your skin ~*~ The love that you show for one who would be winsome, is in a word awesome. Thank you for this lovely. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
your nimble mind twines itself dexterously round the strands of memories that graze my cheek, while the soft of your musing makes the rhythm of the dance so clear. Indigo |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
Ooooh this is goooood |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mind your mind? nah... love your mind, and your words m'friend. This is soft and lovely. Sortah makes me wanna dance barefoot all of a sudden.  Give me your heart |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
they are pale favorites of mine how they jut heavy round just like the empty there in the hands of my mind and other spoons we made out of glue and saliva there are people who come and go in our lives, which leave behind, some very heavy images, that seem to come and go as they please, even if we don't call them up... and sad as it may seem at times, that they've left, that great love we felt for them, helped to some how better our lives... they are truly special people, who we will forever hold connection to. Luv to you  and good morning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, this reaches me in so many ways. I too feel an afinity for times spent near the sand, wishing for more. Sandra |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
such torrid dance one locked within the castle gates the key tempts beneath her |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It is the only sand, you know....and the only dance worth doing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Most enjoyable read - thanks. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one is a romantic treasure. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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