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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-04 04:00 PM


Greens blues and reds
Like traffic lights
In jam
In my head

That take strident colours
Into my words

Distorting and Leaving my vision of words

In a vision

Of Jam

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Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2005-07-04 04:18 PM


Woeheh.  I liked this alot.

-Juju

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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-07-04 08:06 PM


good one!
short and sweet. I like those.

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-07-04 08:18 PM


I not sure about the jam being short and sweet

Bodger

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-07-04 08:19 PM


nice to jam with ya today
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