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Yogi
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0 posted 2005-07-04 02:05 PM



I sit alone alongside a gentle flowing stream
So tranquil and silent it overwhelms me
Not a breath of wind nor birds singing
Tears begin falling so tenderly down my face
Hurting, despair, forever in pain
Wish the rains would fall to hide my torment
To wash away the tears I cry for a my first lost love
I just gaze into the stream lost in contemplation
Not seeing my reflection hurting back with me
A solitary tear falls silent to the stream below
Turning into a apparition of my lost love standing by my side
I turn, to see but nothing just trees and couples walking by
They glance at me and notice the tears falling down my face
I slowly turn back to stare into space once more
Alone and lost evermore in the hurt of lost love


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-07-04 08:07 PM


oh...so beautifully melancholic
Bodger
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2 posted 2005-07-04 08:29 PM


Tears flow into the stream

Taking the salt in small quantities

And maybe a tin soldier buried with just one leg

Will hear the song of a tear

And fairey tales come true

Bodger

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Gaia
3 posted 2005-07-04 08:32 PM


beautiful sadness
what a gentle teardrop

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