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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2005-07-03 04:26 PM



Must be a full moon
like every other night
as I lie
on the floor
in my room
Feeling kinda funky
All up in my head
Drowning in your lies
once again
Our love
beginning to lose it's novelty
Disconnected
to the feeling
All I hear
is static
and dial tone
on the other end
Leave a message
with the operator
Because I'm out to lunch
daydreaming
of something else
You've lost your flavor
just like another overchewed
piece of gum
occupying my time
Must be a full moon
like every other night
because I've just  
hung up on you...



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-07-03 05:38 PM


yep...know the feeling
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-07-04 06:53 AM



ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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3 posted 2005-07-17 01:05 PM


... brilliant noise ...


          this is how a full moon
               pulls at me ...

          questioning,
                towing,
                   ... releasing.

    a great write      * Ct

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-07-17 07:04 PM


"You've lost your flavor
just like another overchewed
piece of gum"

I love that line! LOL

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