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Grace

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 07-03-2005 11:53 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Hardly
Cheerleader material
Beheaded as to hair

And yet somehow
In the study hall
It was she
That ruled the hour

And were we then
Not young paladins
Who discovered colors
For their wars

So she at least
Might find an Earth
Worthy of her smile
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Waterfall27
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1 posted 07-03-2005 12:20 PM       View Profile for Waterfall27   Email Waterfall27   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Waterfall27

Well done!
passing shadows
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displaced


2 posted 07-04-2005 06:52 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

love how this ended
Juju
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3 posted 07-05-2005 12:20 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

I liked this alot.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
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4 posted 07-05-2005 12:43 PM       View Profile for Bodger   Email Bodger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bodger

He and She I often think smile at times

Bodger
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


5 posted 07-19-2005 11:21 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

And her smile lives on in you, I see....and thanks to your superb exposition, I see.

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6 posted 04-27-2007 12:38 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

very beautiful one.

"So she at least
Might find an Earth
Worthy of her smile"

so touching.
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