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Sanatorium |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Separate single beds Spread down the ward Hands outside Wool colored blankets Heads as still As if never made to move No sound is heard The silent sunlight Somehow somber fills the room Disconnected From the world at large Unprepared in the end To be so small |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Huan Yi Interesting write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I could picture the wardroom in your Sanitorium quite easily. Enjoyed. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
hopeless end.a new beginning. |
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