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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2005-07-03 09:19 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#209

Copyright 2005 by:  Mark V Sheldon


chair presses
against a metal body

clicks

inaccurate thoughts

brain explosion

everything evaporating


ready




You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-07-03 10:00 AM


MARK,
The birth of a flower. LOL

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-07-03 10:03 AM


Hmmm....well done..
I'm going to ponder this one.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-07-04 06:54 AM


good write
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2005-07-04 09:39 AM


Seymour...  more like the genesis of a robot, but that's an interesting thought too...

Nancy:  that's the intent...  

Thank you, Dixie.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

ethome
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5 posted 2005-07-26 09:42 PM


Very concise and expressive....Lines of provocation all open....


Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

yv
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6 posted 2005-07-26 09:53 PM


Oddly enough...that's how I felt before every Physics test I took last year...HaHa.  Funny how some things remind you of others...isn't it?

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2005-07-26 10:34 PM


Hi Eric.  I was hoping such things came across, for interpretation can many times prove to be much more fascinating than one' own intent.

yv:  I can imagine, even thought I've never taken physics (but I've done my share of other scholastic testing, and you're right -- these words can conjure up such infernal memories...  But at least they're in the past, eh?)  Thanks for sharing.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how:
http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

MGROVES
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8 posted 2005-07-27 02:02 AM


interesting

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2005-07-27 09:19 AM


inaccurate thoughts

this day

anxiety wrought

flawed complexion

manipulated

by such

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2005-07-27 08:00 PM


MGROVES:  Excellent -- that's the intent.

Maureen:  You continue to impress me in a most delectable way...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how:
http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

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