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Mesmerized In Blue (a DA inspiration)
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Mesmerized In Blue (a DA inspiration) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I gaze into the distance past the white caps and sapphire skylines and my breath draws sharp I am taken aback, the beauty of her simplicity overwhelms me She is majestic as though royalty adored by many who would hold her as their own but she is a mighty temptress luring lost souls calling them unto her with her siren songs and the promise of the unknown; few have ever escaped her hold although all stand in awe of her power and grace. She is moody and shows many faces, yet I understand the depths of her the transitions from light to dark; the calm before the storm when she swirls twirling in dance like a gypsy free mesmerizing me with her tempest crescendos fading to gentler melody where she comes to rest upon the shores only to slowly return with the tide to the azure horizons where my heart is held forever more. (thank you Bella, for the beautiful views that are so inspiring.) Give me your heart Make it real Or else forget about it...Santana |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
OMG Donna, jeez, you've floored me with this one, and this? ......... she is moody and shows many faces, yet I understand the depths of her the transitions from light to dark; the calm before the storm when she swirls twirling in dance like a gypsy free mesmerizing me sigh, you don;t know how i see myself here Bella. you are an exceptional talented poetess Bella and you have me "mesmerized" with this write from your heart.  mxx drove me like a magnet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a stunning piece! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this ia beautiful Donna....high inspire indeed....hugssss  luv yaI keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
breathtaking - beautifully done Donna -  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Bella? just had to come back and read this again.. i'm still mesmerized.  Beautiful. mxx drove me like a magnet |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
oh...beautiful You painted such a beautiful...image-provoking poem. Thnak you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, the blue flowing from your pen is mesmerizing...  Hugs with love, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all for stopping in to read and Maree, thank you Bella for the lovely pics that inspire my moody muse to write. Hugs and peace. Give me your heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...so beautiful Donna. I'm thrilled I didn't miss this one! ~Love ya lady~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I didn't think it possible to capture a wave... but if ever one was to come close... this is it. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
she is a woman many faceted never uninspired.. much like yourself, dear poet g.spirit |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was very beautiful Donna. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Donna there was so much in this poem to enjoy...and it was written so well too... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was gloriously, orchastreated...a vivid read...especially enjoyed I gaze into the distance past the white caps and sapphire skylines and my breath draws sharp Wow!!! loved those images, as in each and every sentence I felt you were gazing on nature's oceanic middle eye and it does take your breath away, doesn't it.... well, b/c I adore the ocean, that is what I chose to see in this....but my words, does not do this master piece justice. Thank you for sharing. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is breathtaking. I could see and feel it all. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Turnabout's fair play, both then and now....this poem lifted me then and it lifts me now, so now I lift it in return. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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