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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-02 06:19 PM


Dishevelled baren tired you became a home to me
Empty peaceful tired smiling vision seeing all and knowing all
Halfway between woman and nature
Halfway between knowledge and understanding
Halfway between something of death and life
Standing as the sun set behind you
Smiling as dawn would surround you
In this
Place of surround


© Copyright 2005 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-07-02 07:06 PM


Bodger
Interesting read, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-07-04 07:07 AM


wonderful!
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-07-04 12:57 PM


Thanks

Bodger

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2005-07-04 02:24 PM


Such affectionate tribute! Nicely done.
TD

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
5 posted 2005-07-04 08:32 PM


TD

Thanks

Bodger

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Gaia
6 posted 2005-07-04 10:14 PM


I like the sound of this when read aloud.

Juju
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In your dreams
7 posted 2005-07-04 11:00 PM


I like this alot!

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

SEA
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with you
8 posted 2005-07-19 01:52 AM


just beautiful....


LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-07-19 07:17 AM


the surround sound of adoration, has been placed to vividly on these blue pages...lovely write.
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