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RennieandBoo
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since 2003-09-02
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Florida!

0 posted 2005-07-02 01:39 PM



Starting off on a whole new world
all by my self
what can I do?
who can I be?
everything is not what it seems

such horror
such fear
hearing so many stories of our cruel reality
how can I survive?
how can I conguer the world and make it be on my side?

Mother says "Don't worry you'll be fine"
with a tear in her eye
Father gave a grunt and a pat on the back
Brother and sister says " don't bother to look back

what can I do?
who can I be?
Everything is not what it seems
How can I survive?
how can I conquer the world and make it on my side?

Each one of us deserves some special lovin!

© Copyright 2005 Rennie - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-07-02 03:42 PM


A question we all ask

I like the words

Bodger

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-07-02 05:02 PM


First, take one dream...
know your goal,
then life and you?
Will complete a whole...

Sounds to me as if your parents know
it's time to leave the nest.  Chin up!
You're about to create a whole new world,
and it should be the best time ...
let your ingenuity shine!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2005-07-02 07:10 PM


RennieandBoo
A common problem, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-07-04 07:00 AM



Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
5 posted 2005-09-30 02:24 PM


nice poem. instead of trying to conquer the world be a friend to it and it will be on your side

-may the force be with you in poetry

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