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Open Poetry #36

Smoke

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-01 04:24 PM

Touching in a background of smoke of people she saw life that someone would decide for her
Stability shone in her face as smoke echoed life that she should seek since it was distance and that matter
Where your rags are rags and nothing you want is open to you
You stand on waste ground
And watch the smoke

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-01 06:08 PM

you draw a vivid picture...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-07-11 10:47 AM

"....waste ground.."

sometimes we all do...hopefully we learn from it then move on, quickly.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-07-11 11:50 AM

I hope when we stand on that ground, it is that last time we do, for that particular issue...

thank you for this....a great voice speaking from your wisdom

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