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SoundWaves
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0 posted 2005-07-01 09:13 PM





It's times like this I sit and listen
thunder in the distance
I start to reminisce
Lightning strikes memories long ago
thunder rumbles through my soul.

© Copyright 2005 Christopher O. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-01 09:21 PM


I love the rumble of distance thunder.  Well done Chris.

believe in what your heart feels...

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2 posted 2005-07-01 10:18 PM


Hi,

this brought back many a great memory of days spent on the beach and watching storms role in from the sea....loved this much!

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

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3 posted 2005-07-01 11:23 PM


I have some here tonight

good write

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4 posted 2005-07-01 11:24 PM


Got some thunder going on tonight too. Loved the poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.

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5 posted 2005-07-02 08:52 AM


Excellent thoughts put to pen here Chris..
Well done and I know where you're coming from.
~Hugs & Smiles, M~

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6 posted 2005-07-02 09:33 AM


But you bring the rumble
this close to our senses,
and we shiver
along your memories...


Waterfall27
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7 posted 2005-07-03 12:25 PM


This is so beautiful

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8 posted 2005-07-03 12:32 PM


Talk about sound waves! LOL, I really do enjoy thunder...especially when it's in YOUR backyard rather than mine. LOL
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9 posted 2005-07-03 12:45 PM


SoundWaves
Enjoyed the read.

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with you
10 posted 2005-07-03 01:16 PM


oh my yes... I love this..goes in my library
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11 posted 2005-08-21 11:48 AM


reading again...thunder again
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