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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

0 posted 2005-07-01 07:55 PM



Love...


Where all thought ends

keeps us

perched

on that fatal balcony.

'Love'.

© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-07-01 08:26 PM


that's good...I like it

well done

SoundWaves
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2 posted 2005-07-01 08:57 PM


Well done!

The spotlight can only get brighter.

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2005-07-01 10:14 PM


A very creative and unique image, Nancy:  "perched on that fatal balcony"...  Yeah, I guess it is kinda like that...

-MVS

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4 posted 2005-07-01 10:16 PM


wow Nancy I wasnt expecting the fatal line, great job and image here....indeed.... hugsss pretty lady...

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

Martie
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5 posted 2005-07-01 10:35 PM


Nancy

Romeo and Juliet perhaps?  

sweetpoetess
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6 posted 2005-07-01 11:01 PM


This is so beautiful my friend.

Poetry is beauty in words.

JesusChristPose
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7 posted 2005-07-02 12:19 PM


I can definitely see where you are coming from with regards to how you define love.

Enjoyed!

scorpio
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8 posted 2005-07-02 08:58 AM


"Love" this write Tinker. You do twenty or less so well.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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9 posted 2005-07-02 09:32 AM


Both you and Mark Sheldon have a wonderful
way of capturing so much, with exacting
word layouts...lovely!

Bodger
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10 posted 2005-07-02 03:50 PM


And an image is presented

Bodger

ice
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11 posted 2005-07-03 06:58 AM


Love this.....:-)
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Waterfall27
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12 posted 2005-07-03 12:24 PM


This is so beautiful

Beki
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13 posted 2005-07-03 02:18 PM


yeah it does
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2005-07-03 05:57 PM


Absolutely beautiful writing Nancy
Goodknight
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15 posted 2005-07-03 07:20 PM


just great Nancy - you say love so wonderfully and with such depth - Paul
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16 posted 2005-07-03 07:35 PM


Nancy, this is lovely.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
17 posted 2005-07-03 08:44 PM


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~Thank you all so very much for your warm replies~

kaile
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18 posted 2005-07-05 08:49 AM


your use of "fatal" made me raise my eyebrows, in a good way
Aleta
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19 posted 2005-07-10 11:53 AM


Woah….  Just before the fall..  beyond the control of emotions, yet… wanting to fly..  

Enjoyed this write!

iliana
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20 posted 2005-07-10 01:23 PM


Enchanting and sweet, much enjoyed, NancyLeel!  Have a great day!  ....jo
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21 posted 2005-12-16 12:48 PM


WOW, you really have it good!
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