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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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 ~~~~ Painted amber upon the night sky as dusk lowers her heart & tranquility unfolds before me I stood in shadows watching each color blend itself into night I keep a fragrance bottle my muse gave me when I met him in endless winter and he settled me into remembering who I am. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (07-02-2005 12:19 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
words as such, make for a tranquil view....lovely |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi Lee, thank you for peeking in....  the skies here last night were beautiful and inspiring to look at.....I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I went to the beach last night and I wished I'd had a camera. It was not as beautiful as this, but it truly was inspiring, just as your poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely this... Have a safe and happy fourth! Love ya lady~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful picture, Lauren.... in photo as well as your words. Hugs,  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hey Nancy~ thanks pretty lady....hugssss you have a great weekend!  ~ Ethel~ I took a series last night of the skies....it was beautiful and inspiring....good to see you here, hope you are well....hugsss... I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love taking pictures of the sky at night L, and yes....how very inspiring. So glad you were inspired to write this beauty. Happy and safe holiday to you sweetie. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sighs* lady this is lovely |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi Donna~ thanks for the smile dear....hugsss you Have a Great weekend..luv ya.... ~ Susan~ thank you, you made my DAY with your comment....so nicE to enjoy life...   I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Good write, I liked it alot! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi Soundwaves~ thank you for peeking in, I appreciate it much.. I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
... becoming a dark tranquility? Once again, lyrics close to my heart. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss you.... good to seE you.....last night the sky was just that... lyrical.... I keep a fragrance bottle my muse gave me when I met him in endless winter and he settled me into remembering who I am. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
You painted a beautiful picture. Your imagery was incredibly vivid. I was thoroughly impressed. This was quite the little treasure hidden among the rest. Warm regards, Kevin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lauren, this is really lovely!  ....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I missed this one. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This the time of year for beautiful skies that is for sure, and you can capture them like no other. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Greeneyes , ohhh you swept me away with this little gem ....bravo ~hugs ~jwolf |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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