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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-07-02 01:20 PM




Because I Am Forever Hoping

Your past weeks of silence
Are still my reason for concern
Since we never said goodbye
I wonder if you would return

My heart can still be found
For I remember we said forever
As we both gave the promise
Our bonds would not sever

I have kept true my promise
After you gave your guarantee
Even those times when apart
You still hold my heart key

True feelings I have shared
I have shown whenever I write
Because I am forever hoping
That our hearts would unite

Hope ©2005
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-07-02 02:56 PM


Hope~
With your name ... it wouldn't surprise me one iota that you'd be 'forever hoping'~
Lovely write, lady~

Now, I hope you will contact an OPEN FORUM Deputy Moderator or Administrator and have this moved to the new OPEN #36 so others can read and reply~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2005-07-03 02:51 PM


Very nicely done

Full of lots of Hope if you know what I mean.


Eric

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