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Open Poetry #35

between the drops

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-07-01 06:56 PM

some skip naked
over cobblestones,
some scatter patterns
like tossed rice,
some trap themselves
in their own creations,

its all in the eye;

what is seen
and what remains
to reveal itself,

rain weaves
window side,
while i wait
for the clouds
to release me.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-01-2005 10:33 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-01 07:07 PM

wow, this is really beautiful....

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2005-07-01 07:17 PM

yup beautiful...

Mxx

drove me like a magnet
to the sea

~stevie nicks~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-07-01 07:50 PM

InkyOne~

'its all in the eye'

And my eyes say this is as lovely as it comes~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-07-01 09:15 PM

Like the view from your eyes, Michelle!

....jo

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2005-07-02 01:23 PM

In the eyes of the beholder , this was beautifully penned

Hope

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-07-03 09:53 PM

wow!

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2005-07-06 04:21 PM

Nice....very nice

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