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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2005-07-01 08:25 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#207

Copyright 2005 by:  Mark V Sheldon


A cloud

seems to stay

but there is no

rain

beyond the calm

fire


waits




You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

© Copyright 2005 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-07-01 08:31 AM


MARK  
THe fire cooks the rain that are the drops of pain. Good write.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-07-01 08:36 AM


love is the healer and so are your words...

hugs and thank you

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3 posted 2005-07-01 09:42 AM


this makes for a lovely picture in my mind
passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-07-01 12:19 PM


nicely done
MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2005-07-01 01:35 PM


Indeed it does, Sy...  Thank you.

Thank YOU, LeeJ -- they are but words...  It is the interpretation that matters.

...and that pleases me, SEA.  

Thank you, Dixie.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

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