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Mooning

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 07-01-2005 07:33 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mooning

Mooning over suns lost shine
I sat within a host of pine
Viewing skies of aqua blue
Stitching threads of shreds of you

Dispersing waves of air in pull
Sifting shreds of bags once full
I threaded through the sands of time
Picking out divine sublime

Dandelions with petals dead
Curled and brown where once were shred
Brining back the breath of spring
Odors of the past that cling

And here I found the dew of awe
Within the tiny specs I saw
Washing in a pan of twirl
Golden flecks of fleece of burl

The labor of the aging old
Panning for a bag of gold


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LeeJ
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1 posted 07-01-2005 08:00 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

hmmmm, well sir, everytime I read you, I'm rewarded with a pan of gold...

Hugs you, Good good morning,and Happy 4th

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 07-01-2005 08:10 AM       View Profile for MARK V SHELDON   Email MARK V SHELDON   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MARK V SHELDON's Home Page   View IP for MARK V SHELDON

A timeless reminisce of timely bliss chronologically synced and remarkably inked.  A fine morning for the thought it wrought...

-MVS

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Seymour Tabin
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LeeJ
And the top of t he morning to you my dear.


MARK  
A good write for an under twenty. Thank you
suthern
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4 posted 07-01-2005 02:03 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Stitching threads of shreds of you

Sheer brilliance my friend... I love it! *S*
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


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Excellent write dear Sy!
May you and yours have a safe and happy 4th!
Sending luv and hugs your way, Nancy
Earth Angel
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6 posted 07-02-2005 06:30 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

"The labor of the aging old
Panning for a bag of gold"

~ The labor of a bag of gold,
  Panning for those days of old!

Love & Gold Light,
EA
scorpio
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This is golden Sy.  Much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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suthern
You are a love.

Nancy
Thank you dear and a happy 4th to you.

Earth Angel
You have wit beyond wit.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.
iliana
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9 posted 07-05-2005 09:51 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

"The labor of the aging old
Panning for a bag of gold"

Beautiful poem, Sy.     ....jo

Earl Brinkman
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I am in awe of your talent.  I hope that others read this poem as well.
 
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