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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mooning Mooning over suns lost shine I sat within a host of pine Viewing skies of aqua blue Stitching threads of shreds of you Dispersing waves of air in pull Sifting shreds of bags once full I threaded through the sands of time Picking out divine sublime Dandelions with petals dead Curled and brown where once were shred Brining back the breath of spring Odors of the past that cling And here I found the dew of awe Within the tiny specs I saw Washing in a pan of twirl Golden flecks of fleece of burl The labor of the aging old Panning for a bag of gold |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmmm, well sir, everytime I read you, I'm rewarded with a pan of gold...  Hugs you, Good good morning,and Happy 4th  |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A timeless reminisce of timely bliss chronologically synced and remarkably inked. A fine morning for the thought it wrought... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And the top of t he morning to you my dear.  MARK A good write for an under twenty. Thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Stitching threads of shreds of you Sheer brilliance my friend... I love it! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write dear Sy! May you and yours have a safe and happy 4th! Sending luv and hugs your way, Nancy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The labor of the aging old Panning for a bag of gold" ~ The labor of a bag of gold, Panning for those days of old!  Love & Gold Light, EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This is golden Sy. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You are a love. Nancy Thank you dear and a happy 4th to you.  Earth Angel You have wit beyond wit. scorpio Thank you my friend. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"The labor of the aging old Panning for a bag of gold" Beautiful poem, Sy.  ....jo |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I am in awe of your talent. I hope that others read this poem as well. |
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