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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Beggars smiling hunger-plain tugging on the shirt-tail, train (if you pray with paws it rains) fluid in a memory something too familial in the mouth of my abstain salty in the wine of more sweetly laughing taps "enough" and the touch of tongue is rough like kitten for the teat it's us pawing at the trace of lack teasing with my eyes shut tight dappling the rats of hiss oblivious to fright I am a kitten, afterall, I am hungry for the meal with claws - suckling the black to plain... The tiny pointed milkiness are pink consistent gravelings and all the words I had to say have left me at the gathering gnawing pouches belliness gentle as my ache allows sorrowing the blind of that fluid is my memory and the touch of tongue is rough whispers are a dull screaming hungry for a meal with claws before I am awake I say: "Nothing, nothing, is enough." And thus, I learned to pounce the hunt and sleep in curvature, benign... mumbling the pain... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
just....awesome, M'Lady  mxx  drove me like a magnet |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gnaws at the soul...and yet, there is in this and all of yours, quit of confidence of knowing what is and knowing your needs, a structure that doesn't hide, but comes forth in all of yours that I read...missed reading you...happy 4th dear lady! Luv Lee J. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, A little fire works for the 4th?   |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Nothing, nothing, is enough." "And thus, I learned to pounce the hunt and sleep in curvature, benign... mumbling the pain..." I wish I could think like you. wonderful mewling... love you lady."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm not the first to say it... but I agree... awesome write! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Tiger Kitten....I do understand, sadly, too well. bunches of hugs....feel like a brewsky, too?! I do. Oh, well....Happy 4th, K-lady! ....jojo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sippin a shiraz for you m'lady and meowling notes with eric johnson blues meows an eatin Better Cheddars right outta the box cuz I'm too tired and lazy to cook tonight LOL |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
where does all this come from!? u're flow never ceases to amaze me If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And oh how they will claw at a pillow or whatever, when taken from thier mother before it's time. The source of life revealed in hungry verses....Such in depth reflections... Celeste you're the best! Eric |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Keep up the good work, hope to see you soon adagio |
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