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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-06-30 11:20 AM


Relaxing is the sway of you,
the rhythm of your breathing
the gentle rocking of two
when you hold me close

Sometimes? I pray
that you'll never
let me go
so I hold on tighter
than I've ever known

trying to match my own
breath to yours
so that I might find
the calm once more

and for a moment       be lost:

frozen in time
in heart beats hold
not wanting tomorrow
to arrive

           here in this moment
            I feel      so alive.


Tomorrow brings with it
fears     of the uknown
and I'm afraid,

    so afraid
of being alone.

Again.


back when I
believed in love and would
lay my heart on the line. T. Lawrence

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-06-30 12:00 PM


"trying to match my own
breath to yours
so that I might find
the calm once more

and for a moment       be lost:

frozen in time
in heart beats hold
not wanting tomorrow
to arrive

           here in this moment
            I feel      so alive."

I know this feeling, this moment, so well...
and you have penned it perfectly.
Love ya lady~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2005-06-30 12:03 PM


yes.  there is that.

I sometimes get bogged down with the empty that will follow.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2005-06-30 03:47 PM


the inhale then the exhale
that moment, if only to hold it...
very lovely words to explain such

scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
4 posted 2005-06-30 04:57 PM


Passionately expressed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2005-06-30 06:32 PM


love has a way of doing that just holding tighter and never letting go.....hugssss you....

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

Dark Angel
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Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-06-30 07:07 PM


trying to match my own
breath to yours
so that I might find
the calm once more


smile, this is absolutely lovely Bella, and so are you

mxx

drove me like a magnet
to the sea

~stevie nicks~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2005-06-30 07:21 PM


Feeling the feeling, you say it well.
Sandra

Alison
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8 posted 2011-03-26 02:26 AM


I miss you, Donna darlin'.  This is beautiful and poignant ... and I miss you.

xoxoxo
Alison

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