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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 06-30-2005 11:20 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Relaxing is the sway of you,
the rhythm of your breathing
the gentle rocking of two
when you hold me close

Sometimes? I pray
that you'll never
let me go
so I hold on tighter
than I've ever known

trying to match my own
breath to yours
so that I might find
the calm once more

and for a moment       be lost:

frozen in time
in heart beats hold
not wanting tomorrow
to arrive

           here in this moment
            I feel      so alive.


Tomorrow brings with it
fears     of the uknown
and I'm afraid,

    so afraid
of being alone.

Again.


back when I
believed in love and would
lay my heart on the line. T. Lawrence
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Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 06-30-2005 12:00 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

"trying to match my own
breath to yours
so that I might find
the calm once more

and for a moment       be lost:

frozen in time
in heart beats hold
not wanting tomorrow
to arrive

           here in this moment
            I feel      so alive."

I know this feeling, this moment, so well...
and you have penned it perfectly.
Love ya lady~
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 06-30-2005 12:03 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

yes.  there is that.

I sometimes get bogged down with the empty that will follow.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 06-30-2005 03:47 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

the inhale then the exhale
that moment, if only to hold it...
very lovely words to explain such
scorpio
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since 10-02-2002
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right...there


4 posted 06-30-2005 04:57 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Passionately expressed.

believe in what your heart feels...

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In Your Poetic Mind


5 posted 06-30-2005 06:32 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

love has a way of doing that just holding tighter and never letting go.....hugssss you....

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

Dark Angel
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6 posted 06-30-2005 07:07 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

trying to match my own
breath to yours
so that I might find
the calm once more


smile, this is absolutely lovely Bella, and so are you

mxx

drove me like a magnet
to the sea

~stevie nicks~

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The Shores of Alone


7 posted 06-30-2005 07:21 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Feeling the feeling, you say it well.
Sandra
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


8 posted 03-26-2011 02:26 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I miss you, Donna darlin'.  This is beautiful and poignant ... and I miss you.

xoxoxo
Alison
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