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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2005-06-30 09:13 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#206

Copyright 2005 by:  Mark V Sheldon


out of time


the sight
shocks


nerves crash

loud changes

strife and fire


love


ended tonight




You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-06-30 09:15 AM


whew...heavy metal...made me hurt
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-06-30 09:16 AM


OUCH!!!
You always manage to put so much into these Mark.
This one packs a punch.  Excellent.
Hugs~Nancy

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2005-06-30 09:31 AM




timeless

the need


togetherness

a want


changes

from the unknown
to known


a beginning

M

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with you
4 posted 2005-06-30 09:38 AM


so sad...but it does happen and you have taken that moment, and held it still...
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-06-30 09:52 AM


MARK,
A word from the abyss.  

scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2005-06-30 09:55 AM


Powerfully charged with emotions Mark.

believe in what your heart feels...

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-06-30 10:02 AM


completed

alone and incomplete

lonely, dark place

this the corner
the dark corner

of an end.  



"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2005-06-30 10:50 AM


LeeJ:  Or perhaps...  "full metal"...?

Good morning, Nancy...  I'm starting to appreciate the old wisdom of "less is more"...  Thank you, as always.

Maureen:  I am most definitely enjoying your interpretations and outlooks.  Thank you for sharing, and might I add:  you are doing this style most admirably.

SEA:  I suppose we have all been there at some point in our lives in whatever capacity...

Seymour:  As has been said:  "In the beginning there was darkness"...

Scorpio:  ...so long as you feel something...  Thank you for your time.

Susan:  A very nice paraphrase.  You too have captured the moment well, and I thank you for sharing...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

catalinamoon
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9 posted 2005-06-30 11:11 AM


Hey Mark, good to see you. Wow, you said it..Love ends, and it always feels so harsh when it does.
Sandra

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