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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-06-30 07:35 AM



and so the ground work is busy
descending pillars of foundations
with cool eyes…indicating fraud
trumpeting dishonesty

was it the first aspect, incumbent to
tasting sight and sound
or the second?
Exotic opinions…
based on traditions?
Diseased and foregone
i say, praise higher echelons of intellect
its there, we all feel it, but ignore it…
the lineage of propellers
where the real substance of belief lies

modification of conduct,
breaking the shackles
of corporeal desires
& bondage to, fabrics of egotism
unveiling consigns, which are
content, to spur us in the side
hard…and long, for as long as it takes

the death of any child, lie stained
in the hands of man…yours, mine

where divine insights reside
our subtle angelic slaves
compare the way of sincerity
embracing totality of duty
the all seeing age of cosmic struggle
the animal howls with urges…devoid
of comprehension…devoid of any beauty

devising lethal waste
corrupting humors, embarking on prey
vomiting outwardly
the bowl of darkness…
heaping bones of destruction
spitting on substance

petrified minds
without capacity to listen
listen and digest mistake
in all its composition…

what man has brought forth
isn’t working and is archaic
human belief becomes misconception
of what is acceptable

there are and always have been
divine rules, imposed on man
when corruptness penetrates
behavior slides, so to, does a code ethics
understanding, looses clarification
until all variances become dangerously real
dangerously corrupt

we adopt realities to
substantiate truths
and herein lies parenthood
transmitting the precise nature
of light and darkness

the lesser man, should be the greater
rather, a disgrace to society
a difference in quality, in structure
are the foundations “we” set forth

incapacity rules divergence
resulting in complexities and mind sickness

imply no rank or levels
much more, pick up the man who lay
dying in the street…for
when he dies, we all die
screw materialism, screw images
and then we strive for love?
begging for just one moment of it
regardless whose wife or husband they are
shame, shame on societies executions
it’s the child who affirms the all-encompasing
oneness of God, who understands before
he/she dips his hand in societies weave
society’s image of what light is

whose light? Does the child who is sodomized
remember that oneness…who now suffers
for the rest of their life?  That child belongs
to each and every one of us…he/she owns our name
and all that we allow…
do we allow generosity...is generosity material
or does it live within?

individual capacity effects us all
we are a state of affairs
we are abandonment
we are what encompasses
the brand of choice
if one fails, we all fail…
we have duty
we are an affirmation of being
drawing back the curtains
of visions, substance, affirming priority

worship
i ponder what do i worship?
what do i deem my most prized possession
when….
i’ve left the garden go
where weeds now grow
continuing to differ and chock
in the inner realm of meaning
imposed
our world is convulsing
bleeding
a matrix through the mind’s eye
is exactly what we choose to see
we cannot understand what we refuse
to view and believe

picture in your mind for one
moment…a child
No! Don’t look away…see now, what
is brought into visible existence

Look deep into that child’s eyes
The child who has been destroyed
And tell them…about their essence


Written for and by the child

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-01-2005 06:15 AM).]

© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2005-06-30 07:40 AM


wowza lady LeeJ..you do it don't you

enjoyed you

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-06-30 07:44 AM


...where divine insights reside
our subtle angelic slaves
compare the way of sincerity
embracing totality of duty...


~*~

and what DS said.  

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2005-06-30 08:40 AM


LeeJ,
Now that's a little much for breakfast. LOL
Perhaps a little sugar will help.
Good morning sweet.

suthern
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Louisiana
4 posted 2005-06-30 08:44 AM


Oh, lady... when I saw the title, I knew this was going to be a powerful write... I just didn't know how thoroughly it was going to turn me inside out. *S*

I could quote so many lines... but all are spectacular... so... if I may, I'll simply say...

Amen.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2005-06-30 10:15 AM




you did this with 110%.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-06-30 10:30 PM


"Don’t look away…see now, what
is brought into visible existence

Look deep into that child’s eyes
The child who has been destroyed
And tell them…about their essence


Written for and by the child"

damn, Lee, but you CALL it straight from the hips, with veracity, my friend
and I MUST print this out (if it's OK with you?) to share with a social worker friend

hugs to you dear lady, for the power in your voice, the lovelight that beams from your heart


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