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Open Poetry #35

Sunday's Child

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-06-30 07:06 AM

Sunday's Child

There you are,
exactly where I thought you would be.
You can't fool me!

Hiding behind the cause of another,
laced tightly, escaping eyes
behind the blue.

I found you once,
on my nightstand,
pictured in a hold,
a smile marking your face
like invisible ink,
to disappear
as quickly as it came.

Passion is in the air,
winds taxing its pull,
the innocence long gone
in these "summertime blues"
of heaviness, moistening
this body.

The music feigns agony
as the vibrations trap me
into the impossible,
dreams that crowd the unknown
intervening as daylight arrives.

"Parting is such sweet sorrow"
as I drink what can't be held,
for I fill very quickly and
weaken after a few.

You could traipse me,
map me with your touches,
as I try to hold back the laughter
of sensitivity...

but the sun awaits
and the ocean calls
to put to rest my
"Kaleidoscopic views".

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-06-30 08:13 AM

very interesting write...loved this M. Exceptionally filled with images and emotion...but gave the sense of hope, and faith, patience....enjoyed

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-06-30 10:16 AM

Oh my this was wonderful!

*click*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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