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sweetpoetess
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0 posted 2005-06-29 07:53 PM


I lay in bed
With my eyes closed
And I listen very carefully
As the rain gentlely
Falls on the roof
And I doze off to sleep
To the sound of rain

Poetry is beauty in words.

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1 posted 2005-06-29 07:56 PM


and such a peacefull sleep it is, when rocked by the rain... liked this very much
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2 posted 2005-06-29 08:02 PM


The rain always brings such a lulling sound with it that is very peaceful. Enjoyed your words this evening sweetpoetess

Give me your heart
Make it real
Or else forget about it...Santana

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3 posted 2005-06-29 09:25 PM


Julie~
I welcome the rains that come when they bring such gentle poetic thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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