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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2005-06-29 12:06 PM

Did you know
I was reaching out
in darkness
blind to what
the world was
ignorant of what
the outstretched hand
signified...

and is that why
you led me
deeper into the black
and then left me
lost and frightened
alone
unprotected...

because you
were playing
a sick game
with the heart
of an innocent
for the right
of passage
as a "true"
Master...

You've left bodies
by the wayside

there are casualties

somehow I think

you know this...

and look the other way
on the walk to your
throne.

WhiteRose

"fit to be tied"

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

1 posted 2005-06-29 12:46 PM

I know this.....but now there is all sunshine and he's gone.

Very well written

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

2 posted 2005-06-29 12:49 PM

Very well written. I enjoyed the read.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2005-06-29 03:43 PM

Sometimes they do that. I like this one, there's a fragility to it, mixed with realism.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-06-29 06:49 PM

Anne~
There is such a tender sadness to this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-06-30 02:05 AM

Don't think he'll make the throne! Good write, WhiteRose.

....jo

Tndeer1
Member

since 2005-06-24

Posts 87
TN. USA

6 posted 2005-06-30 02:13 AM

Sad but so true and happens too often. Very, very well written.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2005-06-30 03:24 AM

Very well expressed common situation in the world today but a very, very, long way to go before the throne is even in sight let alone sat on - I'm not sure if that's a comforting thought or not when one thinks "soul". Good write!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2005-06-30 10:24 AM

I always step aside for those on that journey. After all, who am I to get in the way of Karma?

nice work.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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