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Heart Strings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Heart Strings Sorrow pulls upon the strings Making sounds in hollow rings Capturing the heart in stir In the magic of a blur Rolling out a carpets red And showing only green instead Woven in a shawl of lace Offered like the dew in grace Capturing this butterfly Reeling in a line of sigh Coloring the sky to gold Wrapping up the soul in fold Illusions in a cup of tea A phantom in a fantasy Hypnotized by cup and dish And offered up a drink of wish But often using chum of bale One is swallowed by the whale |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Good morning sir, and might I add not only is your rhyme perfect, this.... -------------------------------- Sorrow pulls upon the strings Making sounds in hollow rings Capturing the heart in stir In the magic of a blur --------------------------------- is perfect in it's truth. Guess that means, you have written a perfect poem! Good morning sey! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A morning  and thank you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I've got an idea, I'll read your tea leaves, if you read mine? Cup of tea Sysee? Love your visions...and how you put them to words... Hugs to you and yours... Cheer up, we're over the hump, it's Wednesday...Yippppeeee....  Morning |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful..as always Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ That's a deal. Good morning sweet.  scorpio And thank you as always. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sorrow pulls upon the strings Making sounds in hollow rings ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I had to stop right here with these lines and just savor and inhale their dark beauty and depth.. poetic brilliance me sweet Sy... yes, you are.  *ww*  Writers try to capture the exhilaration of Nature & inspiration of Love. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sey you never cease to amaze me with your ryming structure..enjoyed this... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSeymour~ You certainly tug on the strings of my heart with your beautiful rhyme~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your pictures were beautiful and so are you. WW Goldenrose You are a dear. Marge, That deserves a |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tea? Did you say tea?  Why I have it ready and waiting for you Sy. You deserve a cup or two or more for this beauty of a write. Have a wonderful mid week day. ~ , & , Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, A for your day. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a perfect gentle warning... beautiful work, my friend! *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So that was the giant slurping sound I heard...   |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "Capturing this butterfly Reeling in a line of sigh Coloring the sky to gold Wrapping up the soul in fold" You do capture with your lovely poetry! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. Sunshine Yes, that was I swallowed by a whale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie To capture lovely you have to use lovely. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow cool. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Juju Thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Rolling out a carpets red And showing only green instead Woven in a shawl of lace Offered like the dew in grace" Especially liked the above verse, Sy. Also, yes.....a whale, sometimes! ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thanks for the comment and glad you enjoyed. |
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