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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2005-06-29 05:30 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#205

Copyright 2005 by:  Mark V Sheldon


a drought

of touch

breaks

our peace

as we interfere

with hopes

to end


us




You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

© Copyright 2005 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-06-29 05:54 AM


In the end

all that matters

is that hope

brings about

a touch

of peace...


M ... I know I don't make much sense...but did I ever? Always enjoy your less thans that are actually more than



LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-06-29 09:50 AM


sorta like getting burned and learning from the incident, so we learn to cherish more, the inbetween times...hopefully leaning toward them and making that peace more a part of our lives then the disharmony?


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-06-29 12:53 PM


Very well done Mark.
I do enjoy these so much!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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4 posted 2005-06-29 12:56 PM


Well understood.

I really liked this..

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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5 posted 2005-06-29 01:47 PM


I enjoyed the read.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2005-06-29 02:32 PM


MARK,
Clever, enjoyed.

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
7 posted 2005-06-30 09:21 AM


Maureen:  sense is relative to the context and filters through which it is perceived.  You always make sense to me, and I enjoy the thoughts you inspire.  Thank you.

LeeJ:  I suppose that's one possibility...  Perhaps also simply learning from our mistakes...?

Nancy:  It is a pleasure to know that you are enjoying yourself.  

Cloud 9:  ...then you know...  Thanks for the read & reply.

sweetpoetess, I appreciate your enjoyment.  Thank you.

Thank you, Sy...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

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