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Angela
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Angela |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I see smoke and shingles in the smothered light, because this roof is the darkest path I can use to hide. I pass by gables to a roof higher, the studio's dorm window marked with the history of some past by the green glow of small wood shutters skirting a past consciousness gone now. Angela is crying in the room inside where the long curtains dribble in the light breeze, the sad sounds she makes fills my mind with consolation for her and again I'll take her in my stronhold, hug her gently, and then reassure her her time best spent is when she is loving me. She will go silent then start to sob as her wind comes back to shiver out her bad choice. How bizarre it seems as I tap the frame. The strain in her throat pumps out anxious shrieks, and nearly choking on the words she summons me my heart is as helpless as a crushed mourner crying over solemn graves of yesterday's loved ones. A helpless situation we find our selves in. Lovers forever against the grain of reality..... IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
her time best spent is when she is loving me. one line I liked among the "all" of it... always a pleasure to read you "e" M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
my heart is as helpless as a crushed mourner crying over solemn graves of yesterday's loved ones. A helpless situation we find our selves in. Lovers forever against the grain of reality..... This grips the heart... particularly of those who know helpless situations all too well. *S* Excellent write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome A touching write, enjoyed the read. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I likek this one alot. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ *touching* these gentle words in understanding~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing....James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a softly whispered sigh, to say this one sings the blues |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sigh......understood. ....jo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sad, and well said. Sandra |
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