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skoolyardturtle
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since 2005-06-28
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0 posted 2005-06-29 04:22 AM


the wandering imagination
the long walk back home
the wind blows only for you
the feeling of loneliness
when surrounded by every living thing
the ripcurls and sandy shore
the sun shines on no one
thousands of thank yous
and a million apologies
walking away from it all
is all i know how to do
living for the moment
and planning for tomorrow
the weather forecast
no longer mattered anymore
it's been raining
for as long as i can remember
the low rumble and dark clouds
stretch on forever
the sky looks so clear
when i am sleeping
sometimes i wish it would snow once in a while
sometimes
sometimes i wish it would snow

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2005-06-29 05:41 AM


I know this place, and the feeling therein

enjoyed this in a bittersweet way

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-06-29 06:22 AM


send the rain this way...Yes I understand this feeling all too well...but today I awoke to some good news (first in a very long time)and I will wrap myself up in it and treat each tomorrow as a promising day.

Thank you for waking me up today in thought.
and welcome, if I have forgotten to say so.

M

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2005-06-29 11:14 AM


I really like this poem.  You are one my list of poets now congrats!
sweetpoetess
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4 posted 2005-06-29 12:51 PM


This is a wonderful poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-06-30 12:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
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