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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-06-28 11:00 PM


Silk slowly slides and clutches
a morning,   straining to sooth
and trace...to wander endlessly
upon the plain of yearn.

Must the river rise and tickle
slenderness?  Finding a heel
waiting to be touched.  Must
the moistened lip be gently
tugged and savored in ruby
succulence?  Or, dry beneath
the soft night rays...as waters
lap a virgin shore.

For in the still of darkened
day, when owls cry in
echoed mourn....a sigh shall
sound...and then betray...
A moment then reborn.

© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-06-28 11:10 PM


I think I have forgotten
how to write like this...

teach me....


ctowen
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2 posted 2005-06-28 11:34 PM


I feel like I should be hung upside down and slapped .... lol


           a great write once again!

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2005-06-29 01:30 AM


Good write!  Enjoyed!
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2005-06-29 07:17 AM


laughing at Craig's response...but loving  the feel of your words~~

hugs
M

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-06-29 09:48 AM


Hey Barry, great to see you and read you


this was a flowing river of sooth...thank you for sharing

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2005-06-29 10:33 AM


Barry~
Lovely ... as always ... in all ways~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-06-29 10:41 AM


Barry,
That's about as pretty as it gets.

Angel1
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8 posted 2005-06-29 02:03 PM


Wonderfull Heart.
scorpio
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right...there
9 posted 2005-06-29 05:17 PM


It's always a pleasure to read your words.  Much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Martie
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10 posted 2005-06-29 05:26 PM


Barry...this is very beautiful and a bit sad...much enjoyed!  
iliana
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11 posted 2005-06-29 07:46 PM


Sure liked this, BJ!   ....jo
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