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Quad_dune
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since 2005-06-25
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Ontario ,Canada

0 posted 2005-06-28 08:24 PM


      Your speaking but no one is hearing you.
   Like there’s a guard on your mouth that says  no trespassing.
      No one can make sense of what your saying.
     Like your talking to yourself repeating the
       same thing over and over in your mind.
    Muzzled you stand the world blocked from  
                   your opinion.
  But who cares who knows about that brilliant  mind in that head.
   Who cares your just another person, another  opinion.
                 Another child.


~~~I bet if we all just listened, I mean listened to what children have to say we’d all be better off~~  



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sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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1 posted 2005-06-29 07:36 PM


This is so full of truth. I enjoyed this poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.

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with you
2 posted 2005-06-29 07:47 PM


*laughing*
sorry...I bet you don't have kids yet, do ya? I'm just teasing ~ really...sometimes my kids just go on and on and when they are done, they haven't really, said anything LOL but yes, I understand what you mean, sometimes, it's very important...

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